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A short story I wrotecontinued by ~exmortisfangirl:iconexmortisfangirl:



A short story I wrote continued….
“I get it, your gonna bash my head in with the crowbar.” Said Stranger. Stranger quietly as Yoi smiled darkly at him. Stranger quietly said “can I close the door and you not try to kill me.” Yoi answed “who said anything…about killing you…” Stranger quietly closed the door then locked it. “So should we stay in ?” asked Bugman. Stranger knodded and pointed toward the door where Yoi was tapping it with her long black finger nails. Stranger then asked Rick where the door to the other room was. “It leads to the hallway right? Plus do we have a running chance to get to our rooms?” asked Bugman. “Yup.” answerd rick.

Yoi laughed as she listened to their plan. She then changed herself into her cat form where she saw Stranger look back and say “all I see is a cat and that’s it. Coast clear”. She then ran toward Stranger as he ran into his room. She knew that girls were not allowed into boys rooms but it did not apply to the people who transformed themselves.
She then watched Stranger hide inside his bed. Stranger and Bugman did not see her but had no idea what Yoi was planning. He did not see the black cat slip outside.

Yoi changed herself back and headed to her room and grabbed a plushie she made. Yoi had been taking classes on sewing but the classes also taught how to mix magic with the work. Yoi found out how to use certain material to transform things. But she particularly found a way to do it with plushies. She was targeting Stranger with a transformation plushie because he was annoying her particullary by talking or singing in his sleep above her room. Bugman…Well she had her can of raid near her bed. Rick…she has no idea…

Stranger woke up next to an orange and red cat plushie. He found squeezed it for a secound. A black vapor emirged and wrapped around him. He went unconicous. Two minutes later he looked around to see the plushie beside him. It took him a few secounds to realise he got changed into a cat by the plushie (the cat he changed into is not a plushie). He could change himself back but he realised he needed a bathroom to do it. But he realised that the door was locked as one of his roomates was using it. He meowed out loud as Yoi stood behind the door laughing….
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The crowbar part was used if you are wondering to mislead Stranger. I should provide more info on Stranger:
He is half Bake-neko and demon
But he looks like a teenager with cat ears and tail
Do I need to mention his stupidity and fact that he has some smart points when comes to buliding completely ridiclous rube goldberg like devices with Bugman
He also suffers from Sleep telekiness which means he moves things around in his sleep. He can do telekiness conciously. Which may explain why Yoi is so mad. I mean wouldn't you be mad if you had to sleep with a guy upstairs causing things to bang? That's worse then snoring!

Note about Bugman
Bugman resembalces (can't spell it) a large praying Mantis.
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Excellent! heheh i pictured bugman to be a praying mantis like beast before i read your info on him :P

Nice way to create a diversion (use of crobar). And what a clever way to transform stranger ; )

what will become of the other two i wonder? If you don't want to continue the story, you don't have to, it's kinda good to leave stories hanging sometimes. :nod:

OH and what does rick look like?

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When people show me their pain and sorrow, I'll give em happiness and joy in return. :D
I was thinking about what specis Bugman is. Actually his specis is people that look like humans that can change into insects or gain insect like parts. He (for some reason) likes to be in giant praying mantis form. Rick looks like an animorphic rino with a dino like features. But here is a kicker for Bugman. That raid can I mentioned is in fact bug spray (I am not sure weather bug spray is called raid or not) and what ever form Bugman is in and in his human form, bugspray just basically is poison to him....can't kill him.

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Reality has more unrealistic things then fiction.
Raid is a brand of bugspray. But now i'm understanding them better :) It's cool to picture these guys as being creature-like (or human with creature parts). and i like that fact that bugman cant die of bugspray, it would be too obvious of a threat if he could die of it :nod:

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When people show me their pain and sorrow, I'll give em happiness and joy in return. :D
But I think i will do a comic (I have a new digital camera and I don't think I will need a scanner) where bugman gets hit with bugspray and what happens if he gets it on him. He basically either goes unconious or coughs.

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Oh, and there are two other roommates that Bugman and Stranger live with. A Troll druggie, and a vampire named Ed. Ed can not stand all three of his roommates (they call him a goth) plus he has to endeur his roommates lack of understanding of what a vampire is. But they know he can't go near garlic and they use it for pranks. The Troll druggie can change form and is always surrounded by a cloud of smoke. He doesn't play pranks on Ed but the idea of him smoking stuff in the bathroom and spending a lot of time in there is enough for all three of his roommates to declare him a "Health Hazard". He is the roommate that was using the bathroom when Stranger needed it. poor Stranger:( he spends hours in there.

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XD poor little kitty stranger! Actually, it might be better to use the scanner rather than a digital camera. Using a dig camera makes the images bad quality and they're never a good "lightness". If you use a scanner than the pics would turn out better (depending on the kind you use).

Anyways, good luck on the comic ^^

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My family has four computers and my dad has the print/scanner next to his and we need a joint acount (he gets the scans and then emails them to my account.)

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