lol, its looking good, keep it coming!

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Some pictures are drawn over from photos and alterted.

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(Good idea to keep it left to right - at least you remember what your first language is! )

The only gripes I'd have about this is to let us in on where or what the setting is, or who the character is. This feels like this chapter should be set further down the line, or work on a full-page style strip (as opposed to four panels) to push the story forward more, as well as show off more of your art. Also try hand-drawing your speech bubbles on the original art, they'll help more with your composition (all the panels here are close-ups, you can't see the character!) - and you shouldn't have those thick 'ips' at the end of the bubbles, really.

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Nice job! I like it!^_^
I dont get what she transforms into though,
but its still good!

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she transforms into a werecat.

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